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TikiTalks
01-20-2008, 12:59 PM
So, I used to be quite the writer, I have journals and spiral notebooks filllllllled with stuff! And I thought I'd share some things with you :)


* Remembrance. A thousand tears have fallen since that fateful day.
I still haven't cleaned out your closet, or thrown that mornings paper away.
I can imagine again it's just another day and that soon you'll come back from being so long away.
I looked at your picture hanging on the wall. I never took down that old grocery list.
Part of me died that day, the day you were taken away.

"The towers toppled and the masses screamed",
That's what the papers all said.
They said it on the radio, and I couldn't keep my head.
I wasn't working in the garden, or sweeping up the leaves.
I sat in front of the TV gripping a table edge.
The buildings went and fell, they weren't very stable..

A thousand tears have fallen since that fateful day,
the day I didn't get a goodbye kiss and rushed you out the door.
I wish I could relive it, and see your smile just once more.

The children all asked me when you'd be back home,
and i couldn't explain that the one they miss so much,
has an unmarked tomb.

A thousand tears have fallen since that fateful day,
the day the world came tumbling down and so much life was snatched away.

(Remembrance was written from the view point of a widow due to the 9/11 tragedy)

*Eyes of Love

I was walking one day and looked at a face.
My gaze couldn't stray from the eyes he possessed.
My breath became shallow, my heart beat quickened.
For within that gaze I saw something more.

I saw hope reflected there.
Hope in the form of the moon, high in a starlit sky.


But not just moon and stars and sky,
whole galaxies revealed themselves to me.
And as I stared I had this thought --
"How empty my own eyes must be."


Now here we are,
and still when I look at you,
I see my eternity.


Your hand over mine, I couldn't be happier.
But the words you whispered within my ear,
make forever seem so short.
"within your eyes I see myself.
I see the warm breeze,
and every unmade memory."

Eyes of Love was written and printed on a custom (made by me) graphic for my cousins wedding.

bonnie
01-20-2008, 02:42 PM
You are SO good! I LOVE to read, but I can't write worth a flip. I would love to read more!

TikiTalks
01-20-2008, 02:54 PM
You are SO good! I LOVE to read, but I can't write worth a flip. I would love to read more!
I'm writing my own wedding vows.. I think they're too long, but here they are!

I have lived most of my life responsible for no one, answering to no one and committed to no one. During this period of my life, I considered the world mine for the taking and truly believed that I was living life to the fullest. Then you came into the picture, and all of a sudden, I realized I was deceiving myself.

Without you my life would be empty of all inspiration. There would be no work of art for me to gaze at; no person of greatness before me; no timeless melody to listen to. My life would exist in shades of gray instead of vibrant colors, and I would be less than whole.

There are things in life that are inevitable. The sun will rise and set, the tide will come in and go out, the seasons will change, the birds will fly South for the winter and return in the spring, and the caterpiller will transform itself into an enchanting butterfly.

Shane, from the moment we met, I knew that we would be more then friends, I knew that we would develop into something lasting and precious, just as I know that the sun will rise in the east, and set in the west.

Our love is an undeniable truth. It is a union of two spirits destined for everlasting happiness. You are the sun which brings me light in a dark world, and warmth when I need it. You share with me the joys and hardships of life, you bring out the best in me . You are my Swallow from Capistrano - my beloved confidante, and I will cherish and love you until the end of time.

I vow that I will be there for you when you need a friend, hold you when you need comfort, and aide you in any endeavor you undertake. No matter what passes, what trials and tribulations come our way, I will stand by your side faithful, and true.

bonnie
01-20-2008, 02:58 PM
Oh my! There won't be a dry eye in the place! That is just awesome!

TikiTalks
01-20-2008, 03:11 PM
Oh my! There won't be a dry eye in the place! That is just awesome!
yeah, I'm not sure I'm gonna be able to say it without bawling lol

bonnie
01-20-2008, 03:20 PM
I didn't cry. Everyone was so surprised. We had a BLAST when we got married. Once I finally told my momma what I wanted and that I was doing it my way it all just kinda fell into place and worked out.

Bambam
01-20-2008, 04:43 PM
Michelle you have a talent there..glad you shared your writings. :pMy mother passed away 9/9..two days before 9/11..reading this made me cry sad tears; but the The Weddings Vows brought Happy Tears..it's a shame the writers on strike..would love to read more.
Freida

too&me
01-20-2008, 07:07 PM
Lovely, I hope your marriage will be all you wish for and more!

Anne-Samantha's Mom
01-20-2008, 08:03 PM
wow Michelle very well written.

TikiTalks
01-20-2008, 08:43 PM
I've realized i have a very difficult time expressing my self vocally. I can say more in a text message than i can in a half hour conversation. it's my secret shame.

too&me
01-21-2008, 09:55 AM
No shame-rejoice in your talent don't squash yourself. There are plenty of ignorant fools who can do that for you.

Evelyn
01-21-2008, 03:52 PM
Michelle -

I know you have a great deal on you, planning for a wedding, but could you write somethng from a parrot's point of view for the book?

Evelyn

TikiTalks
01-24-2008, 06:15 PM
Michelle -

I know you have a great deal on you, planning for a wedding, but could you write somethng from a parrot's point of view for the book?

Evelyn

Evelyn,
I would LOVE too! I can't promise when it'll be done, but absolutely!

Evelyn
01-25-2008, 08:38 AM
Evelyn,
I would LOVE too! I can't promise when it'll be done, but absolutely!

That would be great!

We don't have any kind of timetable yet.

Evelyn